*Sniffle* How sad yet totaly heart-warming to!!! I love this story!!
i cryed when inuyasha died and when kagome left.....u know what i think i cryed during the whole thing it was the best and if i had to rate it higher then 10 it would soooo be higher then a billion or more -sigh- i just lovvvvvvvvvvvvved if ur a very very good wrighter ( i think i spelt that wrong -.-) u should wright another when u come up with a idea
This most definatly has to be the best story i've read *cries* soo cool ='}
Hmm...I read this story before in FFnet and their it was much longer with lots of embellishments-so many infact that it took me a while to remember the whole story. This version is plain...like crude grapes that have been mashed together and have not been fermented long enough. The oone on FFnet is like drinking fine aged wine that has cultivated that sweet yet pungent tatse. Although even in this premature version one can see the awnings of what will be a great story. How you went from here to 64 chapters I will never know! But I did enjoy the saga of what happened later on in their lives, and how you are overall more creative about Inuyasha dying and her coming to live with Sesshoumaru. Here, it is well-written and yet rushed oddly neough. The pace is too rehearsed and has no 'vivre'. But later you write a saga! [Long enough to detail children and their lovers] so I guess this means that we can all acgieve the impossible with hard work. I should revise my stories too...but the work! Gah! I'm better off enjoying. Anyhoo, ciao. Oh an on FFnet my penname is hentai18ancilla. TTL!
:D I await the next installment!
Sweeeeeeeeeeeeeeet!!!!! Never have I read a extravagant Sesshomaru and Kagome fanf fic!!! *_*
i loved your story but you really need to finish it
That was an awsome story, u should get it published, that would be a book that i would read over and over again!!!!
Great story! Please complete more soon.
Great story! Please complete more soon.
I really love your stories. I hope you make more chapters for 'A Demon Should Act Like A Demon'. It is so emotional and heart warming. Thats for writing the stories you have writen. Again please make more chapters. Oh and if you could make a dictionary for the stories that would be good because I don't understand some of the words you have in your stories. Thanks, Bye.
this story is really nice greta job ^^