hope you dont mind if i continue with this story where they find out everything it will be called FLAME
Author's Response: Yes, I DO mind. I already have most of the chapters completed for this Fanfic’s sequel, to be released next year. If you post that it is plaigerism and I’ll make sure it’s taken down. You’re very rude to steal someone’s stories when they’re on hiatus and recovering from a serious car accident. YOU DO NOT HAVE MY PERMISSION.
Great read!! Amazing!! I've really been looking for some good fics to read that werent overly mushy or boring . This was really good!
Amazing did I say amazing because it is. I loved how you portrayed her mom. And the story is full of lemony goodness
*cools head down* that was soooo freakinggg hot!!! amazeballz! a reverse version would be awesome too!
I went to bed waaaay too late three days in a row to read this whole fix. Boy, what a ride! I've never felt any sort of interest about bondage but this was tastefully done. Kudos!
You might want to put the whole thing through spellchecker though. I found an unusual amount of typos in there (sparing vs sparring, for example) but that would honestly be my only criticism.
I love this story!!!! Wished it went on longer though..... fantastic writing I must say. So glad I found you on fanfiction.
that's a sweet ending, nicely done. a very very good job
As heated and tempting as always!
You've got a gift for writing, and not only smut (though you are among the best writer's I've ever read for developing sexual tension). Your characters are almost always engaging, multi-layered, and well-developed, your plot, while shoe-string sometimes, is always entertaining, and your dialogue is always filled with subtle nuances that are delightful!
Particularly liked the touch with Usagi's mother being in on the whole thing, though my favorite aspect (as with most your SM work) is the conflicting emotions our progtagonists go through when finding out each other's identities.
I really enjoyed this little work (though my favorites remain your Seras x Alucard works) and am amazed at how quickly and thoroughly you write. It's inspiring.
Never stop! And I hope you start feeling better!
Very nice. I love the tender ending.
It is really over? Seriously? No! This was such a awesome story!!!
This entire story was very entertaining; it is wonderful. I can't believe it is over.
My favorite part had to be the last few paragraphs, how Mamoru starts to realize that he honestly does want more from Usagi other than bedding her.
Again, this is a GREAT story.
Love how it ended! Mamrou and Usagi were always made for each other and reading the way they feed on each other's fantasies was soooo sexy!
Ow, dang! It's getting to the hot part!
Great jo by the way, can't wait for the next chapter *grin*
Damn. What a incredible chapter. Everything between Usagi and Mamoru was incredible.
Oh wow, this story is intense! Love it!
Such a good chapter, nice job :)
Oooow, poor Usagi, poor Mamoru...
Glad to know you're feeling better! And WOW! What a great chapter; totally frustrated that Ikuko walked in but at least they were only kissing ;).
One thing I'm a little confused in the last scene: when Mamoru's binding Usagi's hands in the bathroom are they in front of her or behind her back? Because in his bedroom he's pulling her hands over her head, but I think that'd be a little awkward and painful for Usagi (also not something I'd ever seen/read her doing before); of course if her hands are in front of her, I would've expected her to be hitting Mamoru a little more (rather than just kicking) as he kidnaps her.
SOOO looking forward to the next (and last) chapter!
That was HOT!
Oooooow, what more Mamoru have in mind... such a wicked mind, lol