please update soon!
This is a wonderful start, the descriptions are lovely. I can't wait to read more :D
I'm working on Chapter Two at the moment and it is already twice as long as the original chapter.
This type of writing is more my normal style. If you read some of my other fics on FF.Net, you'll notice they are more comedy less discription. I'm aiming for a mystery/drama feel, let me know if you think i ace that or what i need to work on, since mystery isn't really my thing.
Thanks, and keep your eye out for Chapter Two (probably this afternoon or this evening)