I like the story so far but, I think you should add a scene where after jaken shows them their rooms kagome goes to explore the castle and bumps into sesshomaru because she wasn't paying attention to where she was going (she was thinking of inuyasha) and they just stand there for a while staring at each other.
this is a goodstory has good storyline, but i must say that you are moving the story a little too fast. that is all.
not to be mean and the admost respeact i think sesshomaru should be a little more cooler and calm and maybe inuyasha later realizes what he had done and regets it but could be to late for sesshomaru and kagome have now feelings toward each other but that is just my thought and no matter what i coose will be good. i llke what u had so far
Kagome, rin, shippo, and jaken go ther rooms. Once they were in there room sesshomaru speak to kagome about what he expects.
"I want you and rin to start the teaching tomorrow." said sesshomaru.
"Ok, i will teach her but what about my son?" Kagome asked.
"When your setion is over him and rin can play together." sesshomaru said in reply
your on your own from there....
it would be great if we could see how Sesshomaru is with Kagome and what his inner demon thinks of her. maybe Kagmoe should become a demon.
please update soon. would really like to read more and see what inuyasha does and what goes on between sesshomaru and kagome.
