Please write more!
ummm r u like japanese or sumthing cause u kept on changing from enlish 2 japanese and then bac to english if ur gona write a story in enlish then make sure that all of the words r in enlish it's alot easier to understand!
I don't mean to be rude but do you use a beta? I just keep coming across similar errors within the text and was wondering whether this was due to quick writing or if your beta just accidentally skims over the missing words and such. Sorry. I really like the story so far.:)
Cute. I can't wait to read how things turn out. Please update soon.
Write the next part!
Great story! I can't wait to read the rest. Please update soon.