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Reviewer: Sjcg123 Anonymous Date: Feb 04 2017 12:10 AM Title: Chapter 1

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Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous Date: Apr 16 2008 01:21 PM Title: Chapter 1

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Reviewer: KittyLynne Anonymous Date: Nov 15 2006 11:07 PM Title: Chapter 1

My goodness! What a cliffhanger! *clutches chest*

This is really well done- your pov synopsis at the beginning drew me in and got me involved with the characters right away. (Particularly enjoyed the 'banter' between Chakotay and Paris.) Your dialogue is wonderful-everyone is in character whether they're joking around or responding to command.

You do an outstanding job of writing Janeway; you capture  her mixture of toughness and her vulnerability at once.  Your descriptions of the surrounding are great too-I could clearly picture her whether she was sitting in her ready room drinking coffere or standing on the bridge staring down the nebula. The way you phrased things made this seem very much like an actual episode in the series. *sends kudos and cookies*

As you can imagine, I'm looking forward to the continuation of this story! *is on pins and needles* Good luck with chapter two (and god speed to the crew of the Voyager!)

Hugs and best wishes,

KittyLynne

 

 

 



Author's Response:

Thank you, KittyLynne. *hug*

This is one of the best kinds of review an author can recieve, regardless of what genre you write in. I love writing Voyager's characters and I'm so happy that I've been able to keep true to thier personalities and that it transmits that way to the reader.

I will be continuing this story, so no worries on it never being completed ;) I'm just in the middle of "Tapestry of the Past" and I want to finish that one first before concentrating on this one.

Thanks for the yummy cookies and your kind review *hug*

Mistyfur

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