Reviewer: SerenaUSC Signed Date: Nov 07 2017 02:06 PM Title: Chapter One

Christmas 2007 - time to update plz and thank you both......oh and good story

Reviewer: Maggiebabe Signed Date: Mar 28 2009 06:18 AM Title: Chapter One


Reviewer: Serena Riolina Anonymous Date: Aug 07 2007 12:20 PM Title: Chapter One

This is really good, i hope you do update soon. Good luck and cant wait for the next chapter.

Reviewer: sakurawolfblossom Anonymous Date: Feb 18 2007 07:18 PM Title: Chapter One

i don't noe what to say. i think this story is great. it's getting really good. plz update soon

Reviewer: mary_v Signed Date: Dec 17 2006 01:42 PM Title: Chapter One

Ohh! I can't wait for the next chapter!!:D:D

Great work!!:D:D:D

Reviewer: me Anonymous Date: Nov 30 2006 07:54 PM Title: Chapter One


hustle i want the next bbit. this is soooooo gooooood

Reviewer: Moonlaw Signed Date: Sep 22 2006 04:10 PM Title: Chapter One

Great story. There is so much going on and there is a lot of detail. I like it. Try to update soon and very good job so far. There are some minor spelling problems and situations where you confuse the reader but is only minor.

Reviewer: Star Anonymous Date: Aug 30 2006 09:18 AM Title: Chapter One

Great! I love it!!!

Reviewer: Laesk Light Anonymous Date: May 13 2006 07:30 PM Title: Chapter One

a great story going here

Reviewer: Starli Warrior Signed Date: Apr 17 2006 01:03 AM Title: Chapter One

This is great! Good luck on the next chapter and God Bless!!

Reviewer: Maralinn Anonymous Date: Apr 14 2006 09:49 PM Title: Chapter One

The leak situation was kind of overzealous.

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