I'm very impressed with this story! It was very like reading a published novel. I was also pleased to see a strong female character. I'm all for a sexy, power male as a love interest in the story, but I'm personally sick of seeing weak females constantly needing to be rescued. I can't wait to read Chapter Two.
BTW, I had to put the rating up to an R 18+ because of the attempted rape.
Author's Response: wow thank you! it's so nice to know that the site administrator takes the time to actually READ what is on her site! And i'm glad you actually like it. I am very honored! Yeah, sorry about the rating. :)